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Seeing as that Sunday is Easter, I had to come up with a good one to celebrate the holiday. Since I finished it earlier last week, and that it's 6 days until then, I couldn't wait to post this.

Anyway, for this pic, I brought back these chars from last year: [link]

Here, Padraig O'Reilly, the mad bad bombin' bunny, has given his friends some Easter Eggs. Explosive Easter Eggs, to be exact. Don't worry. There's only chocolate inside them. So they won't get blown up. Just get covered in chocolate and get sticky. Paddy wouldn't really hurt his friends.......perhaps.

Stephanie, the fox girl, looks at her egg, and is none-too-thrilled about getting her egg. Then again, she's used to what Padraig does, so she is more complacent. Roisin, the cat girl, is just looking at her egg, not knowing what's going to happen. Won't she be in for a surprise. XD

Dennis, the cougar, on the other hand, knows exactly what's going to happen...and DOESN'T want to be covered in chocolate, as his expression can tell you. Siobhan, the tattooed wolf girl, is even more annoyed to receive yet another of Padraig's "gifts." Lots of things annoy Siobhan, and anythign that explodes is pretty high up on her list.

Have an Explosive Easter my friends!

EDIT: :icongathion: pointed out Siobhan's right arm over her breast. So I have tried fixing it.

Stephanie Logan, Padraig O'Reilly, Dennis Finnerty, Roisin Vallon, and Siobhan McNulty are mine
Art is mine

Critiques


:icongathion:
I think one of the most important things with a standalone picture is that, unless it's an in-joke, it needs to make sense without a detailed description. Even in knowing Paddy's background, there isn't enough being shown or said here to get across what exactly he's done...it's only in reading your artist's comments that it's clear. You'd benefit from changing the dialogue to better reflect what it is about the eggs that they're reacting to. Roison might help if she said something in her oblivious state.

As far as the artwork...the only thing that really sticks out is how Siobhan's right arm goes OVER her right breast, as if she's pulling it under her armpit. Her arm should really be behind it. On a positive note, facial expressions are solid as always...I almost wonder if the picture would benefit from seeing Paddy's face as well, though that depends on how well you feel his dialogue drives the point home regarding his mentality.
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:iconemperornortonii:
He seems like a real prankster! :XD:

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:iconfullmetalkonpaku:
Sort of. He just likes to make things blow up. :D
:iconshinragod:
Honestly man...where do you keep coming up with newer and newer characters!? XD
Dennis definitely looks shocked. Poor guy is the only one knowing what's gonna happen.
That waskly wabbit and his exploding eggs...=-p

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:iconfullmetalkonpaku:
I have actually had these chars for a while. I made a pic of them a year ago, so they never really came from left field. :D

And he sure does look shocked. He doesn't want chocolate on himself XD

Thanks dude! Happy Easter!
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RUUUNNN!!

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Seems someone is falling in love ^^;

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:iconfullmetalkonpaku:
Oh it ain't love. He just likes to blow things up! XD
:iconohmagiku:
Ha, ha, ha!

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